I finally got around to making my second attempt at Lesson One of John K's $100,000 Animation Drawing Course. This lesson was all about construction, which is something I have been using a lot over the past few months, so I figured I would be able to zoom through the lesson with no problem.
...How wrong I was!...
If you want to see my old attempts at this lesson, click here. I should start with the optimistic view that my attempts are better than the first time around, which is a relief! I began by trying to draw the bear at the top of the first page of Preston Blair's book...and trying again...and again...and again. That bloody bear really got the better of me as you can see from this first page of drawings:
My comments give away my dissatisfaction with each attempt. After wrestling with the bear for a while, I decided to move onto the egg heads.
These were all a bit scruffy and I was losing concentration - not even being bothered to switch to graphite for the details. The rabbit was ok though I guess. Anyway, that was late yesterday evening and I decided to call it a night.I decided to keep up the effort tonight and returned to the task of that bloody bear! After drawing the rough construction lines in blue pencil, I decided it still wasn't looking right. It took a few minutes of staring and pondering before I realised what I had been doing wrong. Although I had been drawing the rings around the sphere correctly to show the head's direction, I hadn't been following the horizontal one for the positioning of the eyes. It's so obvious when you realise!
I had been so preoccupied with making the far eye smaller than the near one (for perspective) that I had neglected its position on the head entirely! After fixing the problem, I decided to stop drawing the bear, although there were still a couple of things wrong with it. As you can see, I had another stab at the egg heads. The middle one has a problem with the eyes. They seem to be looking towards the viewer even though they are supposed to be looking further up.Finally, I had a go at the dog on page two of Preston Blair's book.
I felt this went better than my original attempt back in June 2006.I thought I should share a couple of drawing techniques I have learned over the past months that I used for these drawings, but not the old ones. Firstly, I now hold my pencil differently, with the shaft of the pencil almost parallel to the paper, giving a smoother line and forcing me to pivot at my elbow instead of my wrist. I then drew the fine details in a normal position. Secondly (and I think lastly) I drew slowly. I have learned from my gesture drawings that quick sketching is not necessary to produce a nice drawing. I was slow and purposeful with each line in these new drawings.
Ok, just one final note: If John K or Stephen Worth happen to look at this post, may I take this opportunity to ask them if they or anyone else in the know can put up some instruction on cleaning up drawings and inking. These two processes are documented infrequently and I think it would be beneficial to those of us interested in all the component processes of animation. I think good drawings are often let down by poor clean-up.












